Tag: 2023

Wednesday writing

What is your dream bedroom?

Planning: In this writing I’m going to be talking about what is my dream bedroom and what would it be.And do I really want to start my dream bedroom or just stay in the same place ?If I wanted my dream bedroom.Would really get it. I mean my parents don’t really trust me that much,I mean I wouldn’t really trust myself either.

Intro:If you had a dream bedroom.What colour would it be? And would you want to decorate it on your own and add accessories.Hi my name is Bonnie and today I’m going to talk about my dream bedroom so that I would never forget my dream bedroom.

Statement 1: What would the colour of my dream bedroom be? Firstly, if it was my dream bedroom . I think I would want a nice big elegant gleaming plain room that would have some fake plants, to make it look enthusiastic and sparkling. And so when someone comes and walks in for a visit they can look at my beautiful and intelligent room and be like ‘’Wow this is so tidy I never stepped into a tidy room before,it’s so tidy that it’s sparkling.

Statement 2: What size would my bedroom be:Secondly, If I had my dream bedroom I would really want my own bedroom so that I don’t have to wait to go to my brothers nasty room or clean his room.And I want be the first and only one there to sleep in there in my own fluffy bed that’s covered in soft squishy marllows it.And once it in my room it’s mine forever.And closet I would want t

Statement 3 : What accessories would I add in my room:Lastly,If i had a closet like in the barbie movies i would be so happy that I don’t have to take my sisters clothes or anything,And for my accessories I would want to Led lights that when i walk in my room I would just listens to songs and dances around anytime i want because it’s my room and no comes in while my free time.

Conclusion:If i actually had my dream bedroom I would be glad because I have never had a dream bedroom before in my life,But in this writing I felt like I really want it now but the first thing. I want to remember to make sure that ‘’I’ll have to achieve my dream bedroom, because it doesn’t come for free.

tm4 lit Goals

                My term 4 literacy Goals for the next six weeks.

Reading
To get to the next level I need to:

1. I want to get better  at sounding out new words I get stuck on.By learning the words I read.

2. I need to get better at inferencing through the line while reading. 

3. I need to work on the reading my teacher gives me during the week.

I can help myself by:

– Learning and finding out what the hard words mean.

– I also need to focus on my reading while still learning new words.

Writing
To get to the next level I need to:

1. I need to use more punctuation in my writing.

2.I want to also get better at using hard and interesting words in my story writing.

3. I want to find out what adjectives and nouns mean in writing.

I can help myself by:

– I can also help myself in writing while searching up creative stories to write during my free time.

– I can also help myself by practising my spelling at home.